There nothing wrong with your song, except that the quality, maybe I should say clarity, is a little hazy, it's not quite completely clear? Other then that it's pretty much flawless. Just improve the clarity and I think that should be it.
Well I got another version, it's much better, I will post it when i'll get the time, well thanx , I always appreciate when someone leave a review
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